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Structure · 4-minute read

Wake the Dragon: the structure with names you'll remember

Fourteen pieces named after everyday sayings, all built around the lie your protagonist believes. Nine turn up in almost every novel, and five you can leave empty without guilt.

In this article
  1. The fourteen pieces
  2. It all turns on a lie
  3. Nine fixed, five flexible
  4. The beginning and the end look at each other
  5. For today

Some structures have textbook names: “first plot point”, “second pinch point”. They work, but they’re hard to remember on the bus. Wake the Dragon is the Sunday Plot structure, and its pieces are named the way people talk: “All Hell Breaks Loose”, “Upside Down”, “Rock Bottom”.

The idea underneath is simple. Every story starts when something that was asleep wakes up. And your novel is that dragon: it’s been in there a while, curled up, waiting for someone to pay attention.

The fourteen pieces

They come in four parts, and every part starts with “This”. In the first two, your protagonist reacts to what happens to them; in the last two, they act.

Part I · This Is How It Is

  • Nothing to See Here (Yet): how they live before, with their lie working just fine.
  • All Hell Breaks Loose: the event that breaks everything.
  • Somebody Else’s Job: the doubt.
  • No Turning Back: the decision there’s no coming back from.

Part II · This Looks Promising

  • Now for the Fun Part: what the premise promised.
  • That Wasn’t in the Plan: someone they weren’t counting on turns up.
  • Someone Has Other Plans: the opposition shows itself.
  • Upside Down: halfway through the book, everything turns over.

Part III · This Is Getting Ugly

  • On the Offensive: they stop reacting and act.
  • I Smell Smoke: everything tightens, and something hidden is about to blow.
  • Rock Bottom: they lose what they won in “Upside Down”.

Part IV · This Is the End

  • Now It All Makes Sense: they see their lie inside out.
  • Go Big or Go Home: they do what they’d never have done at the start.
  • Happily Ever After (or Not): life afterwards.

Read them in a row and they already tell a story. Try putting one of yours underneath.

It all turns on a lie

Your protagonist believes something that isn’t true. Mara, the librarian in Wanted: One Dragon, is sure she’ll never really be from Valdrago. Each piece shows that lie at a different moment: working at the start, winning at the fall, and finally falling apart.

That’s why “Now It All Makes Sense” isn’t a plot trick. It’s the moment Mara, in the dark library, realizes nobody shut her out. She always left before anyone had the chance to invite her in.

Nine fixed, five flexible

We tested the structure on ten very different novels, from A Christmas Carol to Mist. Nine pieces were in every one of them. The other five are sometimes missing, or another character does them:

  • Somebody Else’s Job: some protagonists don’t hesitate for a second.
  • No Turning Back: sometimes others make the decision.
  • That Wasn’t in the Plan: it often arrives with the event.
  • On the Offensive: sometimes someone else acts.
  • Now It All Makes Sense: it can come early, late or never.

If one of these five isn’t in your novel, “not here” is as good an answer as any other. It isn’t a gap or a mistake. It’s your novel.

The beginning and the end look at each other

Some pieces answer each other. The most reliable, in every novel we tested: “Nothing to See Here” and “Happily Ever After” are the same picture with a different person in it. Mara locks up the library alone on the night of the summer dance; a year later, she’s dancing in the square.

And another one that never fails: what your protagonist wins in “Upside Down” is what they lose in “Rock Bottom”. Write one and you already have a clue for the other.

For today

Write just two pieces, one line each: “Nothing to See Here (Yet)” and “Happily Ever After (or Not)”. The before picture and the after picture. If the second one comes out first, even better: plenty of novels are planned from the end.

In Sunday Plot, pick the “Wake the Dragon” template when you create your novel. Guided mode asks you the pieces one at a time, starting with the ending. And if one of the five flexible ones isn’t in your novel, just leave it empty.